August 8, 2011

choking and keys

embarrassing old comic pages based on real life.

i can't find the rest of the pages, but it ends with Jack being abandoned by April and Lance, and he finds a pay phone on his own and calls a tow truck, and waves at Lance and April as the tow truck goes by them. then he shows Subi that he still has the key that they had to remove from his stomach because it was caught at just where his esophagus ends, and Subi is grossed out.

5 comments:

Wood said...

And how much... based on real life is this comic ?

Nick Marino said...

This isn't embarrassing... THIS IS AWESOME!!!! Great story. I'm really into it. I gotta read the end! Your storytelling here is really smooth. The first couple pages with the walking felt a little choppy in terms of pacing, but once the flashback kicks in it was like BUTTA! BUUTTTTTA!!!!

ross said...

great stuff!!

Kaylie said...

thanks, guys!!!!

CA3 said...

My god, and you're sharing a comic with a story like this, NOW!? You're probably sitting on a treasure trove of old comics you've done and don't even know it.